Question

近來，你們學校對學生課外閱讀文學作品情況作了調(diào)查。請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇文章，

談談你周圍的同學對此現(xiàn)象的看法，并發(fā)表自己的看法和理由。（150字左右）

65%的同學喜歡	1．讀書讓人得到愉悅；2. 擺脫壓力，放松身心 3. 學到知識
35%的同學不喜歡	1. 沒有時間，沒有耐心 2. 書太厚， 拿起來不方便 3. 對考試無用
你的看法和理由	至少2點……

注意: 1. 對所給要點要逐一陳述,適當發(fā)揮, 不要簡單翻譯。

2. 字數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

Recently our school has had a survey on reading literature. It shows

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Recently our school has had a survey on after-class reading among the students. It shows that most of the students, about 65%, spend some time reading while one third dislike it in their leisure time.

According to the survey, the students who like reading literature think it is always pleasant to read some interesting books. Besides, in a modern life full of pressure, it is their common desire to read some imaginary works to seek relaxation from the stress in life. Meanwhile, reading can enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.

But why are so many students unwilling to spend time in reading serious works? For them time is not enough because they have too much homework to do. Some complain that literature works are so thick that they have hardly enough patience to finish them. On the other hand, some simply admit that reading literature won’t help them at all with their exams.

In fact, as far as I’m concerned, books play an important role in our life. Literature works help us learn the customs and cultures in the past and at present, at home and aboard. It provides us with good examples of writing.

【解析】

試題分析：考查正反觀點類議論文。話題是對學生課外閱讀文學作品的情況調(diào)查。本文的要點均已給出，重點是表格中的優(yōu)，缺點，根據(jù)題目的特點，以三段式的形式來寫作比較好。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個人意見時使用第一人稱�？忌�需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。

【亮點說明】范文中好的詞組和句子有：full of pressure充滿壓力， broaden their horizons開闊他們的視野， as far as I’m concerned據(jù)我所知, play an important role 起著重要的作用，provides sb. with sth.給某人提供某物。It shows that most of the students, about 65%, spend some time reading while one third dislike it in their leisure time. 這句話使用了while表示“對比”， According to the survey, the students who like reading literature think it is always pleasant to read some interesting books. 這句話使用了it做形式主語和定語從句，F(xiàn)or them time is not enough because they have too much homework to do.這句話使用了原因狀語從句， Some complain that literature works are so thick that they have hardly enough patience to finish them. 這句話使用了so…that…引導的結(jié)果狀語從句，還有范文使用了 Besides, Meanwhile, On the other hand,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。

考點：考查正反觀點類議論文