2009中考英語作文模板和作文病句、錯(cuò)句修改

中考英語作文 英語作文模板：圖表作文的框架

    as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in　the　table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),

　　significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______

　　 to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it

　　goes without saying that ________.

　　　　There　are　at　least　two　good　reasons accounting for ______.

　　On　the　one　hand, ________. On　the　other　hand,　_______ is　

　　due　to　the　fact　that ________.　In　addition, ________ is　

　　responsible　for _______.　Maybe　there　are　some　other　reasons　

　　to　show ________.　But　it　is　generally　believed　that　the　above　mentioned　reasons　are　commonly convincing.

　　　　As　far　as　I　am　concerned,　I hold the point of view that _______.

　　I　am　sure　my　opinion　is　both　sound　and　well-grounded.

　　中考英語作文 英語作文模板：實(shí)用性寫作(申請信)

　　Your address

　　                                                                Month, Date, year

　　Receiver's address

　　Dear ...,

　　I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the

　　position in .... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident

　　that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising.

　　    .../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the

　　one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind

　　consideration and reference.

　　    I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an

　　interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest

　　convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

　　    Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,

　　                                                                  X X X

中考英語作文 英語作文模板：現(xiàn)象說明文
　　Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that

　　__________.

　　There are many reasons explaining__________________________.The

　　main reason is____________________.

　　what is more_________________________.thirdly_________________

　　_________.As a result_______________.

　　Considering all there,________________________.For one thing_______

　　______________,for another________

　　____.In Conclusion____________________.

　　一種事物或現(xiàn)象（負(fù)面意義傾向）

　　關(guān)于A的話題,早已引起了廣泛的社會關(guān)注。如今在電視、報(bào)紙、日常生活的很多角落，都有越來越多的關(guān)于A的議論。

　　給A一個(gè)精確恒定的定義并非易事，因?yàn)樗�的概念涉及了科學(xué)、人性、思想、經(jīng)濟(jì)、社會、自然等廣闊的領(lǐng)域。一般而言，我們可以這樣描述A…

　　A能成為公眾關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，主要是由于它對個(gè)人、集體乃至整個(gè)世界都有著不容忽視的不良影響。

　　認(rèn)真分析后我們可以看到，A對社會/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，從最直觀的角度來看，A的出現(xiàn)直接損害了（這里加入一句針對性的話，如人類的身體健康和環(huán)境的平衡）。（舉例）。其次，從更深一層次上講，它為人類的精神文明蒙上了一層陰影。更可怕的是，由于A所產(chǎn)生微小利益，卻促成了許多可悲的人們?yōu)槠渫�乎所以，破壞了人類生存的法則和空間。

　　事實(shí)上，A的出現(xiàn)是社會發(fā)展和人類進(jìn)步的產(chǎn)物，A所帶來的危害是人類進(jìn)化過程中付出的代價(jià)。同時(shí)，A的產(chǎn)生來源于部分人們的自私和趨利性，他們看到的是膚淺和片面的利益，而從未從整個(gè)全局和人類整體的利益出發(fā)去認(rèn)識和分析它。這使得A始終揮之不去。對此，我奉勸他們，跳出狹小的角落，用長遠(yuǎn)和全局的眼光去重新審視A。

　　而如今，我們已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我們必須從根源上杜絕它的產(chǎn)生，我們每一個(gè)人都應(yīng)給予A高度的重視，用系統(tǒng)的和科學(xué)的方法去解決，唯有這樣，避免它帶來更多損失，我們?nèi)祟惽斑M(jìn)的腳步才會更加平穩(wěn)，更加歡快的邁向輝煌的明天。

初中英語作文病句和錯(cuò)句修改
 

 
　　下面的英語句子都是出自<朗文國際>三冊和四冊的學(xué)生作文, 不是病句就是錯(cuò)句. 讓我們用銳利的眼睛, 一起來找茬吧.

　　1. We have computer class one week a time.

　　2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.

　　3. There have 100 books.

　　4. I study there very happy.

　　5. I usually swimming there.

　　6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.

　　7. Several hours after, he was surprised.

　　8. He had to asked the other one.

　　9. He thought he speak well.

　　10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .

　　11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.

　　12. This film is very good-looking .

　　13. It is very good to family look.

　　14. I think we can’t live Internet.

　　15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.

　　16. I have a future dream.

　　17. It can help me to walk on my life road.

　　18. I think everything must be change a lot.

　　19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.

　　20. But I singing not very well.

　　21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.

　　22. Almost students use the computer not study.

　　23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.

　　24. When I was very small.

初中英語作文病句和錯(cuò)句修改

　  怎么樣,找出錯(cuò)誤沒有啊. 下面我們來看看要怎么改正吧.

　　1. I have computer class once a week.

　　英語中表達(dá)頻率次數(shù)時(shí):一次 once, 兩次 twice 從三次開始用 three times ...

　　2. Going into my school, you can see many flowers.

　　這里使用動(dòng)名詞going做主語, go 這個(gè)動(dòng)作由后面的you 發(fā)出.

　　3. There are 100 books.

　　表示某個(gè)地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存在句型.

　　4. I study there very happily.

　　Study 是個(gè)動(dòng)詞,表示動(dòng)作的程度要使用副詞,不可以用形容詞happy.

　　5. I usually swim there.

　　-ing結(jié)尾的動(dòng)名詞不可以單獨(dú)做句子的謂語.

　　6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.

　　這個(gè)句子的表達(dá)和語法上都有問題. 如果單從中文意思來看,大家都明白他在說什么,但是要是讓外教來批改,估計(jì)他會無盡的苦惱了.所以我們在不失句子原意的基礎(chǔ)上,使用正確的語法.該句子的表達(dá)應(yīng)該為:

　　By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall.

　　7. Several hours later, he was surprised.

　　使用after時(shí),不能放在時(shí)間表達(dá)語的后面.

　　8. He had to ask the other one.

　　“Have to do something” 是固定用法 ,不定式后用動(dòng)詞原形.

　　9. He thought he spoke well.

　　這個(gè)句子屬于語法時(shí)態(tài)的不一致.

　　10. Mr. Li is from Beijing .

　　一個(gè)英語句子中不能有兩個(gè)謂語動(dòng)詞..

　　11. He studies very hard.. He likes studying Chinese.

　　首先要區(qū)分hard 和 hardly.雖然兩個(gè)都可以做副詞,但在意思上有很大的區(qū)別. He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他幾乎不工作.這個(gè)兩個(gè)表達(dá)相差很大. 其次,be 動(dòng)詞后面不能使用副詞.

　　12. This film is very interesting.

　　這是一個(gè)完全中文式的英語句子. good-looking 一般用來形容人物的.

　　13. It is fit for family to enjoy.

　　又是一個(gè)中文式的句子,

　　14. I think we can’t live Internet.

　　學(xué)生想要表達(dá)的是不要過分依賴因特網(wǎng).不改變原意的基礎(chǔ)上,我們修改為:

　　I think we can’t rely on Internet.

　　15. Most people use the net to send the mails.

　　這是一個(gè)要表達(dá)比例的英語句子.學(xué)生在這里做了一個(gè)中文句子的”強(qiáng)行”翻譯.

　　16. I have a dream about future..

　　Future 在這里不可以直接修飾dream.

　　17. It can help me to walk on my life ‘s journey.

　　“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含義，不可用“road”來表達(dá)。

　　18. I think everything keeps on changing.

　　不細(xì)心看這個(gè)句子,我完全不了解他想表達(dá)什么.但從上下文來推測,我想他想表達(dá)世事在變化的意思.

　　19. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do.

　　賓語從句要使用正常語序.

　　20. But I don’t sing very well.

　　動(dòng)名詞不可以單獨(dú)做謂語動(dòng)詞使用..一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的句子表否定,如果是實(shí)意動(dòng)詞需要有do來幫忙.

　　21. Tom’s mum didn’t care about him.

　　Care 是個(gè)不及物的動(dòng)詞，不可以直接加賓語。

　　22. Almost of the students use the computer not to study.

　　一個(gè)句子中間只能有一個(gè)謂語動(dòng)詞。

　　23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.

　　這是一個(gè)中文式表達(dá)的句子，按照上下文來看，我們修改為：

　　Most of people like sending mail in the internet.

　　24. When I was a little child.

　　Small 用來形容人的體型和物品體積。這里要表達(dá)的“小孩子”的意思。

　　從學(xué)生在作文中寫的英語病句，錯(cuò)句來看，很多時(shí)候都用中文的思維來寫英語句子。針對這種情況，我們建議學(xué)生要多看文章，看地道的英語文章，同時(shí)多多儲備優(yōu)美的英語表達(dá)句子，這樣才能做到拿起筆時(shí)，心中有數(shù)，肚里有貨，才不會生硬翻譯句子而弄出笑話了。