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5．今天是父親節(jié)．假定你是李華，請(qǐng)給你的美國朋友John寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c父親一起度過這個(gè)特別的日子．要點(diǎn)如下：
●介紹下父親對(duì)你的關(guān)心愛護(hù)；（show love，look after，…）
●為父親制作一張卡片；（make a card for，…）
●幫助父親做點(diǎn)家務(wù)事；（help，for example，…）
●陪父親散步等．（take a walk）
●…
注意：1．詞數(shù)80-100；
2．請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear John，
It's Father's Day today．It‘s a special day，isn't it？I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day．My father and I are good friends．Whenever I meet with difficulties，he is always there，ready to help me．
Today I will make a beautiful card for him，with my thanks and best wishes on it．Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening．Besides，I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him，for he likes it very much．I'm sure he'll be very happy．
What'your plan for Father's Day？I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是要求寫一封電子郵件，介紹如何與父親一起度過父親節(jié)．注意郵件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1介紹下父親對(duì)我的關(guān)心愛護(hù)；（show love，look after，…）
2為父親制作一張卡片；（make a card for，…）
3幫助父親做點(diǎn)家務(wù)事；（help，for example，…）
4陪父親散步等．（take a walk）
5其他
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
look after照顧
for example例如
take a walk散步
help sb do sth幫助某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．I think ①we should do something ②to show our love for our fathers on this special day．
①省略了that的賓語從句．作為think的賓語．
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語．
2．①Besides，I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him，②for he likes it very much．
①besides另外
②for表示因?yàn)�，引�?dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 Dear John，
It's Father's Day today．It's a special day，isn't it？
I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day．【高分句型】My father and I are good friends．Whenever I meet with difficulties，he is always there，ready to help me．（介紹下父親對(duì)我的關(guān)心愛護(hù)）
Today I will make a beautiful card for him，with my thanks and best wishes on it．（為父親制作一張卡片） Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening．（幫助父親做點(diǎn)家務(wù)事）Besides，I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him，for he likes it very much．（陪父親散步和下棋）【高分句型】I'm sure he'll be very happy．
What's your plan for Father's Day？I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，材料中給的資料比較全面，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問題．結(jié)合材料可知本文主要用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．