Question

書面表達(dá)

2010年4月，青海玉樹發(fā)生了地震(earthquake)，家園、學(xué)校受到了損壞。一名災(zāi)區(qū)的學(xué)生(Zhuoma)下周將來你們班。她將在你們班學(xué)習(xí)一年。請根據(jù)表格提示，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾螏椭�她，并適當(dāng)寫出自己的想法。

注意：1、字?jǐn)?shù)要控制在80－100詞左右。

2、不要出現(xiàn)你的姓名和學(xué)校信息。

3、開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　Zhuoma will come to our class next week．She's from __________________

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Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　(一)One possible version：

　　Zhuoma is a 13-year-old girl．She will come to our class next week．She's from Yushu, Qinghai．In her hometown, she couldn't go to school because of the earthquake．She'll study with us for a year．As her new classmate, I'll try my best to help her．When she comes, I'll introduce my friends to her and show her around our school．On weekdays, I'm going to give her some school things．I'm good at English, so I can help her with her English．I'll help her join our English club．Maybe she is lonely on weekends．I can invite her to my home．We'll have dinner together．Then, we can play games or watch TV．

　　I'll do my best to make her happy and feel at home．In my opinion, all Chinese come from a family．We should help each other．

　　(二)評分說明：

　　要求考生用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、句式和詞語，完整準(zhǔn)確地表述所提示的內(nèi)容，書寫工整。分四檔評分：

　　1．短文通順完整，表達(dá)清楚，語言基本元誤，17－20分；

　　2．短文較通順完整，表達(dá)基本清楚，語言有少量錯(cuò)誤，12－16分；

　　3．能寫明基本要點(diǎn)，短文不夠通順完整，語言有較多錯(cuò)誤，但尚能達(dá)意，6－11分；

　　4．僅能寫明部分要點(diǎn)，短文不完整，語言錯(cuò)誤多，影響意思表達(dá)，0－5分。