Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

李莉生病住院了，病情嚴(yán)重，需要花很多錢(qián)。由于家庭困難不能支付醫(yī)療費(fèi)用，同學(xué)們?nèi)メt(yī)院看望她，后來(lái)有人提議給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封信，請(qǐng)求社會(huì)的幫助，后來(lái)……

請(qǐng)以此為話(huà)題寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的短文。

要求：語(yǔ)法正確，語(yǔ)句連貫，字跡工整。

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

Li Li is my classmate. She is in hospital now because she is badly ill. We went to the hospital to see her one day. She lay in bed with a sad look. Her doctor told us that her illness was very serious and she had to stay in hospital for a long time. But her family is poor. She has no money to pay for the medicine. We decided to do something. We wrote a letter to a newspaper and asked people to help her. With the help of the doctors, Li Li is getting better and better. She said thanks to us and said that she would study harder to catch up with us

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，講述了李莉遇到了困難，我們寫(xiě)信給報(bào)社，向社會(huì)求助。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：She is……，Her doctor told us that……，She has……，Li Li is getting…..等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。