Question

你校學(xué)生會(huì)正在選舉學(xué)生會(huì)（Students’ Union）主席。假設(shè)你是Li Ming,你覺(jué)得Daniel是合適人選。

根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一份推薦信給王老師介紹他的情況。

注意：（1）要點(diǎn)清楚，語(yǔ)言流暢；(2）字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右；（3）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr Wang:

I’m writing to recommend Daniel as

 

 

 

In a word, he has all the qualities to be a good chairperson. We hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Mr Wang:

I’m writing to recommend Daniel as Students’ Union. His favourite colours are yellow and green. Yellow is the colour of wisdom and Green represents new life and growth. He likes reading and playing soccer. He is outgoing and good at making friends ,whenever we need help he will always be there ,so we all like him very much. He is very smart and always gets good grades in the exams. He is creative and imaginative enough to come up with new ideas.Above all he is very diligent and he doesn’t mind doing extra work for the students.

In a word, he has all the qualities to be a good chairperson. We hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫(xiě)一篇文章推選Daniel做學(xué)生會(huì)主席。應(yīng)該用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作前先根據(jù)給出的提綱，寫(xiě)出有關(guān)的短語(yǔ)和固定表達(dá)備用。最后串聯(lián)起來(lái)。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：朋友喜歡的顏色、愛(ài)好、人品和能力等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)運(yùn)用正確。在100詞左右的篇幅中，恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如be good at，gets good grades等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。