Question

17．著名作家Francis Bacon曾說過："Reading makes a full man．"可見，閱讀對于每個(gè)人的成長都有著舉足輕重的作用．請你根據(jù)以下信息提示，結(jié)合自己的觀點(diǎn)，以"Reading Makes a Full Man"為題，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，表達(dá)你對閱讀的看法和計(jì)劃．
要求：句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
★Why do we need to read？To get knowledge，open the mind，be more intelligent（聰明的），learn a foreign language…
★What can we read？Textbooks，newspapers，magazines …
★What are your reading plans？Reading at least…books in the coming holiday…★…

Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．
Textbooks，newspapers，ma gazines and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person．
I'm planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday．And I'll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life．Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容以"Reading Makes a Full Man"為題表達(dá)你對閱讀的看法和計(jì)劃．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1為什么我們需要閱讀？
2我們能讀什么？
3我的閱讀計(jì)劃
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
not only …but also…不僅…而且…
make sb+adj讓某人怎樣
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
at least最少
spend+時(shí)間+doing sth花時(shí)間做某事

【高分句型】
1．It can ①not only open our minds but also ②make us more intelligent．
①not only …but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個(gè)并列成分．
②make sb+adj讓某人怎樣
2．①Besides，②reading is also ③one of the most important ways ④to learn a foreign language ⑤like English．
①besides 另外，引出下一觀點(diǎn)．
②動名詞reading做主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)is．
③one of+the+最高級+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表示最怎么樣的…之一．
④動詞不定式做后置定語，修飾前面的ways．
⑤like表示例如，給出例子．

解答 Reading Makes a Full Man
       Reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．【高分句型】Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．【高分句型】（為什么我們需要閱讀？）      
Textbooks，newspapers，magzines and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person．（讀什么）
       I'm planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday．And I'll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life．Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now．（閱讀計(jì)劃）

點(diǎn)評 初中英語的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在對所出現(xiàn)的問題或是采取的措施描寫中注意使用連詞或是好的句式．對于中學(xué)作文的寫作，盡量將所學(xué)的知識運(yùn)用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫，考試時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．