Question

12．Write at least 60 words about the topic"I getfriendshipfrom my class life"（以我從班級生活中得到友誼"為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文．請在答題紙上吧作文標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整，如：I get friendship/happiness/help…from my class life）
每個人的成長都離不開班級生活，你認(rèn)為你的班級生活如何？從中你最大的收獲是什么？你又為班集體做些什么？
The following points are only for reference
My class life is exciting/boring/interesting．（以下句型僅供參考）
I get …from…
I expect/hope （that/to）…
My class life is full of happiness．During the four years'school life，I've got so many things from my class life．Friendship is the most important and precious thing that I get． I never feel lonely because of my lovely friends．Once I failed，my friends supported me and gave me courage to move on．When I was ill，my friends helped me and looked after me well．When I succeeded，my friends congratulated me and shared my happiness．Friendship is one of the greatest things that I got from my class life．As the old saying goes，"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．In the last three months，I want to try my best to help my friends and make some wonderful memories．I expect to maintain the friendship between my classmates and me．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容以I get____from my class life．為題談?wù)勀愕陌嗉壣�活，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1你認(rèn)為你的班級生活如何？
2從中你最大的收獲是什么？
3你又為班集體做些什么？
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
because of 由于
look after照顧
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
help sb do sth幫助某人做某事
expect to do sth 期望做某事…
【高分句型】
1．Friendship is①the most important and precious thing ②that I get．
①最高級的使用．
②that I get為定語從句，that是關(guān)系詞，先行詞thing．
2．I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．
so…that如此…以致于，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句．

解答 I get friendship from my class life
My class life is full of happiness．（班級生活如何）During the four years'school life，I've got so many things from my class life．Friendship is the most important and precious thing that I get．【高分句型】（點(diǎn)題--最大的收獲） I never feel lonely because of my lovely friends．Once I failed，my friends supported me and gave me courage to move on．When I was ill，my friends helped me and looked after me well．When I succeeded，my friends congratulated me and shared my happiness．（經(jīng)歷）Friendship is one of the greatest things that I got from my class life．As the old saying goes，"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．【高分句型】In the last three months，I want to try my best to help my friends and make some wonderful memories．（做些什么）I expect to maintain the friendship between my classmates and me．

點(diǎn)評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣