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18．近來(lái)由于極端天氣，我國(guó)長(zhǎng)江中下游發(fā)生了特大旱情，致使小河斷流，湖泊干涸，魚(yú)類(lèi)死亡，湖底成了牧場(chǎng)．請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面的提示詞，以"Let's Do Something to Save Our Environment"為題寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的短文．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括從干旱引出的環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀、環(huán)保意識(shí)到節(jié)水，節(jié)能，控制污染等環(huán)保措施方面的描述．首句已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)．
提示詞：bad weather，bottom（底部），river，lake，grass land，save water，drop，tap（水龍頭），energy，turn on/off，recycle，control pollution，tears（眼淚）．要求：
1．條理清楚，有表明自己觀點(diǎn)的句子．
2．書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用正確．
3．短文中應(yīng)盡量包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名．
Let's Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China．A lot of fishes died．The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land．The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather．
So everyone should do something to save our environment．First，we should save every drop of water，such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water．For example，we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water．Second，we should save energy，such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave；do more walking，more bicycling and less driving and so on．Third，we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories．
Let's act now from everything to save our environment．Don't let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫(huà)示意并給出提示詞的提綱作文．內(nèi)容為從環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀、環(huán)保意識(shí)到節(jié)水，節(jié)能，控制污染等方面描述如何保護(hù)環(huán)境．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)為主要第一人稱(chēng)．輔以第三人稱(chēng)．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；2．我們應(yīng)具有環(huán)保意識(shí)，節(jié)約用水、節(jié)能及控制污染等；3．號(hào)召大家一起行動(dòng)起來(lái)保護(hù)環(huán)境．
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：
dry up干涸
because of 因?yàn)?br />such as…例如
First…Second…Third…第一…第二…第三…
ask sb．to do sth．要求某人做某事
let sb．do 讓某人做某事
參考句子：
The water is becoming less and less because the weather is so bad．因?yàn)閻毫拥奶鞖猓�水變得越�?lái)越少．
First of all，we should save every drop of water．首先，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)節(jié)約每一滴水．

解答 Let's Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China．A lot of fishes died．The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land．The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather．
So everyone should do something to save our environment．First，we should save every drop of water，such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water．For example，we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water．Second，we should save energy，such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave；do more walking，more bicycling and less driving and so on．Third，we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories．
Let's act now from everything to save our environment．Don't let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇圖畫(huà)示意并給出提示詞的提綱作文．考生在作文時(shí)需包含所有要點(diǎn)：由干旱引出的環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀的描述，樹(shù)立環(huán)保意識(shí)，節(jié)水、節(jié)能、控制污染等環(huán)保措施，并能?chē)�繞內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富．應(yīng)用較豐富的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，避免語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣．