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9．地球是我們?nèi)祟惞餐�的家園．"低碳、環(huán)保"已成為當(dāng)今時(shí)代主題．目前，我市英語學(xué)會(huì)準(zhǔn)備在全市中學(xué)生中開展以"Save（拯救）our earth"為主題的英文征文活動(dòng)．現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下三個(gè)方面的提示，寫一篇70詞左右的短文參評(píng)．
1．重要性：只有一個(gè)地球
2．主要問題：污染、疾病、災(zāi)難
3．措施：停止污染、保護(hù)大自然
參考詞匯：disaster n．災(zāi)難  protect V．保護(hù)
注意：（1）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名；
（2）文章標(biāo)題已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（3）可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
Save Our Earth
We all live in the earth．The earth is our home．We have only one earth．We must take care of it．It gives us the best environment．If we harm it，it will be angry．And then we will have a terrible ending．There are three problems in our earth，they are pollution，disaster and illness．
It's our duty to protect our environment．So we must plant more trees，protect the flowers and the trees，reduce the pollution．Protecting the nature is very important．It's our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy．If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment，the earth will become much more beautiful．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．內(nèi)容為圍繞低碳、環(huán)保，以"Save（拯救）our earth"為主題，根據(jù)提示寫一篇文章．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱為第三人稱，也可根據(jù)情況用第一人稱．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．地球的重要性；2．在地球上的三個(gè)主要問題：污染、疾病、災(zāi)難；3．我們應(yīng)采取的措施：停止污染、保護(hù)大自然等．
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語：
take care of 照顧，照料
It is one's duty to do sth．做某事是某人的職責(zé)
makes a contribution to doing 對(duì)…做出貢獻(xiàn)
參考句子：
We must look after it．我們必須要照顧它．
It's our job to protect our environment．保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)．

解答 Save Our Earth
We all live in the earth．The earth is our home．We have only one earth．We must take care of it．It gives us the best environment．If we harm it，it will be angry．And then we will have a terrible end．There are three problems in our earth，they are pollution，disaster and illness．
It's our duty to protect our environment．So we must plant more trees，protect the flowers and the trees，reduce the pollution．Protecting the nature is very important．It's our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy．If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment，the earth will become much more beautiful．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給出漢語提綱的作文．考生須在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容．這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)．