Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Every day, in all kinds of weather, a lot of people go jogging (running slowly). Why has jogging became so popular? Most people start jogging because you hear it is a very good form of exercise. Jogging makes the heart strong and help people control their weight and stay slim. If you jog regular, you needn’t take pills or skip meals to lose weight. Jogging can also make you to feel better.

Donald Robbins, he is 42 years old and works in an office, began jogging a few years later because he felt he was overweight. At first he could only run 300 metres, and two years later, he ran a marathon — over 42 kilometres.

Do you jog? If you do, be sure to ask your doctor on advice. Does jogging cost much? Almost nothing. But it is very important to have a pair of shoe that are made especially for jogging. If not, when you run on hard ground for a long time it may cause your feet to hurt.

Answer 1

【答案】

Every day, in all kinds of weather, a lot of people go jogging (running slowly).Why has jogging so popular? Most people start jogging because hear it is a very good form of exercise. Jogging makes the heart strong and people control their weight and stay slim. If you jog , you needn’t take pills or skip meals to lose weight. Jogging can also make you to feel better.

Donald Robbins, is 42 years old and works in an office, began jogging a few years because he felt he was overweight. At first he could only run 300 metres, two years later, he ran a marathon — over 42 kilometres.

Do you jog? If you do, be sure to ask your doctor advice. Does jogging cost much? Almost nothing. But it is very important to have a pair of that are made especially for jogging. If not, when you run on hard ground for a long time it may cause your feet to hurt.

【解析】

第一處：became→become become的過去分詞為become，故把became改為become。

第二處：you→they 此處人稱與前面的Most people保持一致，故把you改為they。

第三處：help→helps 主語是Jogging，謂語動詞用單數(shù)，故把help改為helps。

第四處：regular→regularly 副詞修飾動詞，故把regular改為regularly。

第五處：to去掉 make后加賓語時要接不帶to的動詞不定式作賓語補足語，即動詞原形，故把to去掉。

第六處：he→who 此處為非限制性定語從句，先行詞是Donald Robbins，指人，故把he改為who。

第七處：later→ago 根據(jù)語境可知，此處是說幾年前他開始慢跑，故把later改為ago。

第八處：and→but 此處說的是慢跑后與慢跑前的對比，表示語意的轉(zhuǎn)折，故把and改為but。

第九處：on→for ask sb. for sth表示＂向某人要/請求某物＂，故把on改為for。

第十處：shoe→shoes 一雙鞋是兩只鞋，應該用shoe的復數(shù)形式，故把shoe改為shoes。