Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）畫掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

In October last year, I was studying at a school in Cambridge but it was only my second months in the school. At an end of the month the head teacher organized a party for all the new students. It is a good chance to get to know my new classmates and I really looked forward to join in it. As the party was on 31st October, I thought it was a Halloween party. So, the day after the party, I searched everywhere and managed get a witch’s costume. When I arrived at my head teacher’s house, he opened the door and looked at us if I had been complete mad.

All the other students wore on normal clothes!

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】第一處：In October last year, I was studying at a school in Cambridge and it was only my second month in the school.關(guān)聯(lián)詞前后兩分句表達(dá)的意思一致，不含轉(zhuǎn)折語(yǔ)氣，故用and連接。故將but改為and。

第二處：In October last year, I was studying at a school in Cambridge and it was only my second month in the school.second,第二，指第二個(gè)月，用單數(shù)。故將months改為month。

第三處：At the end of the month the head teacher organized a party for all the new students.此處為固定搭配。At the end of，在……的末尾，在……結(jié)束的時(shí)候。故將an改為the。

第四處：It was a good chance to get to know my new classmates and I really looked forward to joining in it.由第一句“ In October last year”可知，講述過(guò)去的事情，應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。故將is改為was。

第五處：It was a good chance to get to know my new classmates and I really looked forward to joining in it.look forward to doing sth.為固定搭配，意思為期望做某事。故將join改為joining。

第六處：So, the day before the party, I searched everywhere and managed to get a witch’s costume.由上下文知，此處意為在party開始前找合適的服裝，before在……前。故將after改為before。

第七處：：So, the day before the party, I searched everywhere and managed to get a witch’s costume.manage to do sth.試圖，設(shè)法做某事，為固定搭配。句意為想要找到合適的服裝。故在此處加上to。

第八處：When I arrived at my head teacher’s house, he opened the door and looked at me if I had been completely mad.由后面i可知，此處指“我”一個(gè)人，主語(yǔ)是單數(shù)。故將us改為me。

第九處。When I arrived at my head teacher’s house, he opened the door and looked at me if I had been completely mad.此處意為班主任想看“我”是不是完全瘋了。副詞修飾形容詞作狀語(yǔ)。故將complete改為completely。

第十處：All the other students wore normal clothes!wear on意為緩慢進(jìn)行，時(shí)間消逝；用在此處不合題意。wear,穿著，后面直接加賓語(yǔ)。故將on刪掉。