Question

隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，交流通訊方式也越來(lái)越方便快捷多元化。幾乎每個(gè)高中生都有了自己的QQ號(hào)，可以用QQ和自己的朋友聊天，向老師問問題，交流思想。但有的同學(xué)花了太多的時(shí)間在QQ上，有的QQ好友甚至有幾百人之多。請(qǐng)你就以上現(xiàn)象加以分析，并發(fā)表自己的看法。首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于100詞。

With the development of science and technology, the way of communication has become increasingly diverse and convenient.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

With the development of science and technology, the way of communication has become increasingly diverse and convenient. People can communicate with their friends or relatives freely in different ways. Among them chatting on the QQ is one of the most popular ones. Almost every senior middle school student has their own QQ number, with which they can chat with their friends, ask their teachers to help them solve their puzzles and exchange their thoughts. QQ is really a helpful tool to them.

However, some students have spent too much time chatting with their QQ friends, some of whom are totally strangers. Most talk on the QQ is completely meaningless. What’s worse, some students have hundreds of QQ friends, taking up almost all their spare time, even in the classroom.

I do think that QQ can bring us much convenience and benefit when we are communicating with others, but what we should do is use it properly and reasonably. We should limit our time on it and devote ourselves to our studies.

【解析】

試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。