Question

10．你的英國筆友Johnson下個學(xué)期要來你校交流學(xué)習(xí)，請你寫一封100字左右的etmail，介紹你學(xué)校的基本情況，內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包含下列幾個方面：課程安排，作息時間，食堂就餐，社團活動．開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好．
Dear Johnson，
So nice to hear that you are coming next semester．                                                      

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息 你的英國筆友Johnson下個學(xué)期要來你校交流學(xué)習(xí)，請你寫一封100字左右的etmail，介紹你學(xué)校的基本情況．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：課程安排，作息時間，食堂就餐，社團活動    2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be eager to渴望去做；Actually事實上；the same as 和…一樣；Approximately 大約；
Actually the curriculum is much the same as that in UK，namely Chinese，math，chemistry，physics，PE，biology，and of course，English．（高分句型一）
Morning lessons start at 7：40，with each lasting 40 minutes．Lunch is usually served at 12 at the school canteen，after which you will have a break for about an hour，and then take afternoon lessons at 1：40 p．m．（高分句型二）
Approximately 50 clubs of all sorts are thriving in this school，ranging from hiking，bicycling，football，basketball to music，debating，and theater．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Johnson，
      So nice to hear that you are coming next semester．You must be eager to know what it is like to study here．Actually the curriculum is much the same as that in UK，namely Chinese，math，chemistry，physics，PE，biology，and of course，English．（高分句型一）Morning lessons start at 7：40，with each lasting 40 minutes．Lunch is usually served at 12 at the school canteen，after which you will have a break for about an hour，and then take afternoon lessons at 1：40 p．m．（高分句型二）Approximately 50 clubs of all sorts are thriving in this school，ranging from hiking，bicycling，football，basketball to music，debating，and theater．（高分句型三）You will certainly find your stay here enjoyable．
      Hope to see you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．