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13．為了營造一種"多讀書，讀好書"的良好氛圍，我班將舉行一次主題班會，要求以"A good book can affect our life"為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過的好書，并談?wù)勛约旱母形颍�注意�?．字數(shù)：120個詞左右講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計詞數(shù)）．
Boys and girls，
As Francis Bacon once said，reading makes a full man．A good book can affect our life in one way or another．My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart．It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period．
From the book，I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune，we should never give in or run away．Instead，we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out．Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world，but also wash our souls．To live an enjoyable and meaningful life，let's read more good books!
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇演講稿．向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過的好書，并談?wù)勛约旱母形颍畬偬峋V作文．在寫作時人稱以第三人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．重要短語：in one way or another（以這種或另一種方法），one such book （一本這樣的書），overcame physical disabilities（克服身體上的殘疾），come across（偶遇），give in（屈服），run away （逃跑），be supposed to do（應(yīng)該做某事），not only…，but also…（不但，而且），live a…life（過…生活）．

解答 Boys and girls，
 As Francis Bacon once said，reading makes a full man．A good book can affect our life in one way or another．My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart．It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period．（介紹一本自己讀過的好書）
 From the book，I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune，we should never give in or run away．【高分句型】Instead，we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out．Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world，but also wash our souls．【高分句型】To live an enjoyable and meaningful life，let's read more good books!【高分句型】（自己的感悟）
That's all．Thank you!

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．