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【題目】目前，中國已經(jīng)進入汽車社會，越來越多的汽車正走進尋常百姓家。但是有些駕駛員的素質(zhì)令人擔憂，他們的所作所為嚴重危害了自己和他人安全。這種現(xiàn)象與社會的發(fā)展極不協(xié)調(diào)。請你以李華的身份，結(jié)合下列幾點寫一封倡議書，倡議所有駕駛員做“中國好司機”，主要包括：
1).簡單描述以上現(xiàn)象； 2).你的建議；
1）嚴格遵守交通規(guī)則； 2）不隔窗拋物； 3）禮讓他人，不闖紅燈。
注意：1). 詞數(shù)100左右；
2).可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3).開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：規(guī)則regulations 讓路give way to 闖紅燈run the red light
Dear drivers,
At present, more and more cars have entered the homes of ordinary people.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear drivers,

At present, more and more cars have entered the homes of ordinary people. But what worries us a lot is some drivers' bad quality. Their behavior harms the safety of others and themselves. This phenomenon is against the development of our society. Then, I have some ideas for you to be good drivers.

First, all of us most obey the traffic regulations. Second, you shouldn't throw things out of the car window. Some cleaners are hit by the passing cars and die per year while they are picking up the things you have thrown away. Next, give way to passer-by politely at the cross roads and you mustn't run the red light. Last but not least, always remember, you families are waiting for you at home.

I really hope all the drivers can take action from now on and try to be good Chinese drivers.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】考查提綱類作文。本文要求考生寫一封倡議書，倡議所有的駕駛員做“中國好司機”。寫作要點包括：1.描述倡議書背景：目前，中國已經(jīng)進入汽車社會，越來越多的汽車正走進尋常百姓家。但是，有些駕駛員的素質(zhì)令人擔憂，他們所作所為嚴重危害了自己和他人的安全。這種現(xiàn)象與社會的發(fā)展極不協(xié)調(diào)。2.個人建議：嚴格遵守交通規(guī)則；不隔窗拋物；禮讓他人，不闖紅燈。寫作時注意要點要全面包括，在此基礎(chǔ)上可適當發(fā)揮增加細節(jié)，同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。