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6．假設你是李華，在美國孔子學院的筆友Jack對漢字毛筆書法非常感興趣，寫信向你咨詢學習毛筆書法的建議．請你用英語回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．學習毛筆書法的必備工具；
2．你認為學好毛筆書法的有效方式；
3．學好毛筆書法的好處．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：書法 calligraphy 毛筆 writing brush  硯臺 ink stone
Dear Jack，
I'm glad to know you're interested in Chinese Calligraphy．It's my pleasure to tell you how to learn Chinese calligraphy．
As we all know，the four treasures of the study are writing brush，ink，paper and ink stone，which are essential to learn Chinese calligraphy．As to the way to learn it，I think，for one thing，you may study the basic structure of each Chinese character step by step；for another，choosing a good model book to copy is of great benefit to you．
Chinese calligraphy is a fine art of the excellent traditional cultures in China．Not only does it do good to health，but also it can cultivate morality and purify our souls．
Hoping you can come to China to enjoy it personally．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是關于學習毛筆書法的建議的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明書信目的；二學習毛筆書法的必備工具；三學好毛筆書法的有效方式；四學好毛筆書法的好處；五提出希望．
高分句型：
1．As to the way to learn it，I think，for one thing，you may study the basic structure of each Chinese character step by step；for another，choosing a good model book to copy is of great benefit to you．
句子里As to 表示"關于，至于"；for one thing…for another表示"一件事…另一件事"；choosing a good model book to copy 是動名詞做主語；of great benefit to 表示"對某人有益處"．
至于學習英語的方法，我認為，一件事是，你可以學習逐步學習每個漢字的基本結(jié)構(gòu)，另一件事是，選擇一本好的字帖對你很有益處．
2．Not only does it do good to health，but also it can cultivate morality and purify our souls．Not only 位于句首，引導的句子用部分倒裝；do good to 表示"對某事有好處"；cultivate morality and purify our souls表示"陶冶情操凈化心靈"．
練習書法不僅對于健康有好處，而且能夠陶冶情操凈化心靈．

解答 One possible version
Dear Jack，
I'm glad to know you're interested in Chinese Calligraphy．It's my pleasure to tell you how to learn Chinese calligraphy．（點明書信目的）
As we all know，the four treasures of the study are writing brush，ink，paper and ink stone，which are essential to learn Chinese calligraphy．（學習毛筆書法的必備工具）As to the way to learn it，I think，for one thing，you may study the basic structure of each Chinese character step by step；for another，choosing a good model book to copy is of great benefit to you．【高分句型一】（學好毛筆書法的有效方式）
Chinese calligraphy is a fine art of the excellent traditional cultures in China．Not only does it do good to health，but also it can cultivate morality and purify our souls．【高分句型二】（學好毛筆書法的好處）
Hoping you can come to China to enjoy it personally．（提出希望）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
英語寫作是一個人英語綜合水平的體現(xiàn)．英語寫作水平的高低包含的要素很多，而句子構(gòu)造方式是非常重要的要素．一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達作者的意思．考生應明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文．它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確地表達意思的能力．因此，要求考生在寫作過程中牢牢記住以下口訣："先讀提示，要點與格式要弄清；時態(tài)語態(tài)要當心，前后呼應要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫好細檢查，點滴小錯別忽視"．學生在明確目的和掌握要領后，要嚴格按照規(guī)定的時間去完成作文．