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8．最近，越來越多的學校成立了名為"起床俱樂部"的協(xié)會，來鼓勵學生早起床．為此，你校學生會發(fā)起了討論．請按要求寫一篇英文報道．
【寫作內(nèi)容】

討論話題	我校是否要成立"起床俱樂部"
時間	上周一
地點	學校會議室
討論范圍	高一、高二學生代表120人
討論結(jié)果	67人贊成；理由：培養(yǎng)良好生活習慣，利用好早上的時間． 48人反對；理由：是否早起是個人習慣，不需要強求． 其余：個人可以按照自己的意愿和方式．

【寫作要求】
只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容．
【評分標準】
句子結(jié)構準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構連貫．
參考詞匯：起床俱樂部  Getting Up Club．
Recently，more and moreschools have set up special organizations called"Waking Up Club"to encouragestudents to get up early in the morning．A discussion concerning setting up asimilar association in our school was organized by the Student Union in themeeting room last Monday.120 students from Senior One and Senior Twoparticipated in it，of whom 67 approve of it because they believe it will getthem to develop good habits and make full use of the morning time．However，48students don't think it a good idea for the reason that whether to get up earlydepends on one's habit and there is no need to force them to do so．As for therest of the students，they insist that everyone should follow their own wishesand their own lifestyles．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫一篇報道，介紹學生就"學校成立‘起床俱樂部'協(xié)會來鼓勵學生早起床"進行討論的情況．寫作要點：1．討論話題；2．時間；3．地點；4．討論范圍，5．討論結(jié)果． 既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．
寫作時時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語：set up （建立），encourage sb to do sth（鼓勵某人做某事），participate in （參加），approve of （贊成），develop good habits （培養(yǎng)好習慣），depend on （取決于），force sb to do（迫使某人做某事），as for（至于，關于）．
【高分句型】
1.120 students from Senior One and Senior Two participated in it，of whom 67 approve of it because they believe it will get them to develop good habits and make full use of the morning time．
這里是非限制性定語從句，從句中為"介詞+關系代詞"，"數(shù)詞+of+whom"．
2.48 students don't think ①it a good idea for the reason ②that whether to get up early depends on one's habit and there is no need to force them to do so．
①這里是賓語從句省略了連接詞that，動詞 think的賓語為it a good idea for the reason that whether to get up early depends on one's habit．
②這里是that引導的同位語從句，從句中的主語為whether to get up early，從句中的謂語動詞為depends on，賓語為one's habit．"There is no need to do sth"意為沒有必要做某事．

解答 Recently，more and moreschools have set up special organizations called"Waking Up Club"to encouragestudents to get up early in the morning．A discussion concerning setting up asimilar association in our school was organized by the Student Union in themeeting room last Monday．（討論話題、時間、地點）120 students fromSenior One and Senior Two participated in it，（討論范圍） of whom 67 approveof it because they believe it will get them to develop good habits and makefull use of the morning time．【高分句型】However，48 students don'tthink it a good idea for the reason that whether to get up early depends onone's habit and there is no need to force them to do so．【高分句型】As for the rest ofthe students，they insist that everyone should follow their own wishes andtheir own lifestyles．【高分句型】（ 討論結(jié)果）

點評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關鍵是認真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．